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Clare, the Claymore by Eruner Clare, the Claymore by Eruner
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Art belongs to Ferlancer.
Claymore belongs to Madman Entertainment.
Magic the Gathering belongs to Wizards of the Coast.
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This is main character of Anime/Manga series "Claymore".

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+Legendary
(vigilance) --> (absorb 1)
{absorbs cant stack! They aren't cumulative like my "Shield"s}
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clokverkorange Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Is this supposed to be written in doge-speak? If not it makes zero sense. 
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Eruner Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
doge-speak makes no sense with this card. If you haven't seen anime "Claymore", then you should at least know how to play Magic the Gathering and read abilities in "(" and ")".
It's fan card of main character, and I believe that it makes sense and it's quite accurate description. However, I've chosen unusual way of description in MtG rules, which may confuse keen MtG fans. But still, this card is playable.
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clokverkorange Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
The wording makes absolutely no sense. 

"She calms down and gains control of her" isn't even proper English, let alone proper Magic terminology. It's not "unusual", it's just wrong. 

You put abilities where explanation text should go. So, as the card stands now, her first ability does nothing. 

According to Magic rules, this card is basically just a 5/5 for 5 mana. Her abilities need to be reworded and have less flavor in the ability text. 
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Eruner Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
then what should be Rule text according to you?
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clokverkorange Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
Clare, the Claymore
w/b w/b w/b w/b w/b
Legendary Creature — Human Soldier
WB: Clare, the Claymore gains +1/+1 and first strike until end of turn. 
WB, Untap: The next time Clare would be dealt combat damage, prevent that damage and put a +1/+1 counter on it. 
5/5
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Eruner Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
and now change rule text to non-MtG text. Imagine that you are a writer and write same abilities without using MtG terminology.
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clokverkorange Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
No, because then there's no point in talking about the card. 
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Eruner Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Then stop lecturing me when you are unable to convert MtG rule text into non-MtG one. You clearly haven't seen anime and have no experience in writing stories. 
Obviously, I didn't want correct MtG wording like "deals one damage to target creature" but the more epic like "archer fires an arrow and hits target creature (1 dmg)" with the same meaning. If my english wasn't proper, as you claim, then fine, show me proof/example of how it should have been written. But in my way.

And the second ability is: Untap: Clare, the Claymore gains absorb 1 until end of turn. 
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XaiviarNightwing Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
What do these abilities mean?
Is this MAGIC?
This follows none of the keywords or format, and grammar is a bit off ( and gains control of her?).
Art is bananas cool and flavor is exquisite though. Reformat it to MTG wording and I would play it in a self-craft deck.
WB, Remove X damage from @LEGENDAMEHERE: @LEGENDNAMEHERE gains Bushido X and first stike until end of turn.
UNTAP: @LEGENDNAMEHERE gains shroud until end of turn. (Activate this ability only if @LEGENDNAMEHERE is tapped and attacking.)
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Eruner Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
This card does not follow common MtG wording and rules by purpose.
However, you need knowledge of the "Claymore" anime to understand why and what I described on this card.

And, btw, this is "Fan Card", and I mixed MtG wording with regular language :-)
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XaiviarNightwing Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
oh i see, i have to still watch that series do you recommend watching the anime or reading the manga?
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Eruner Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
I rather don't recommend any.
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XaiviarNightwing Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
why was the series bad?
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Eruner Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
kinda, yes, especially with content.
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XaiviarNightwing Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
How so if you dont mind my asking?
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DwellerOfDeep Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
adding a rofl: i made several years ago (5 years due to european print)) a XXXer card set (i dont remember number but planned as a regular off set of 100ish (mainset are 300 more or less) i printed 50ish of them and lost the original backup in a computer crash >.<

differences: White: Claymore Miria/Claire/Deneve/Helen/Undine/Flora in fact most of the northern war, Human (Raki and some other) White/Blue: Organizations Claymore ("trustworthy" on 1st Arc for some) Ophelia/Beth/Alicia/Galatea/Ilenia/Beth/Miata (common point of all Claymore : white, organization : Blue, status retained for Alicia White/Red Claymore/awakened status and 5 color for Theresa assuming very special status )Yoma off course Black

used magic Rules and ability, (also notify : Becomes more angrY not anger) (i used same symbol for the set xD but i mad it with the softwar i used for doing the set) used also Tribal specification on Claymore artefact equipement and some enchant, point retained must/can be played in 5 color since Most Spells and Enchant are cross colored (cant do as MtG done with color since based on feeling a spell can emane from any color (like my Blind Rage who is red but basicaly a hast booster))

another LoL point is : My Claire is 4/4 Super haste (can attack before you play it but if you fail to pay the cost next turn you lose the game if doing so) Frenzy 2 (+2/+0 on attack) Claire isnt a defender type (tho she can use yoki reading to avoid attack (separate card Aka : Feel Aura Tribal enchant who give Claymore +0/+2 when Untapped, assuming Claire give instruction so they can avoid attack just like in the Luciela/Raphaela episode with deneve and helen))

why Super haste : obviously Clare is the fastest claymore (thanks to Ilena Flashsword then using Flora Windcutter place Clare in that category) also her Awakened form is about speed, Frenzy : self explanatory

well i will wait the end of the manga to redo all my card (mainly keeping them same but need to have a digital backup) and add new cards

btw .... nice work (as a Huge Claymore and MtG Fan i can only deeply agree)
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Eruner Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011
thx, I would like to see your cards you described, maybe harddisk is still useable component, and data would be recovered, but I dont know details, so its up to you.

Clare is very strong and overpowered in Animanga, but Superhaste sounds too much, maybe Multystrike (more than doublestrike) I would understand, but superhaste?
What was her mannacost?
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Gamniac Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
A bit too wordy than necessary and I question the creature typing ('Woman'? should've gone for 'Human'), but looks looks a rather solid card otherwise.
charging in as a 6/6 or 9/9 first striker, then untap and act as blocker in the same turn (which renders vigilance rather pointless).

oh, and once again: Legendary creature.
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Eruner Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
oh, really, I forgor that its legendary, wait a second...
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CommanderXillian Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011
Must. Resist urge. To choke a bitch.
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duragon27 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011
MTG 4 ever! ;)
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JTMS Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011
lol, nice, thanks.
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Eruner Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011
thanks for what??
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JTMS Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011
look at my avatar ;)
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Eruner Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011
Clare?
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JTMS Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011
Yup :)
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nablon Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011
a bit weird, but funny:P
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Overlord-J Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011
Funny. :D
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